Sean's 'blog for 2011

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Loose Change Cover Design
December 10, 2011

I have been working on my Loose Change cover. That's my latest book project. It's kind of a novel of short stories. Much like a TV series in a way. Each short story is complete, and often reminds the reader of what happened before, but it also forwards a story arc to the end of the book where the story of our hero comes out, and we find out why he's homeless.

After much review and comment, I have ripped the title better, cropped in the edges (too much white space) and changed "You can help end homelessness in our time. Give." as it did appear to be a call for charity. Now I am all for people giving to the homeless, in fact this book will likely have some of its proceeds given directly to the homeless of Boston but I didn't want people to think this was a charity book, or some non-fiction book about homelessness. It's a dark crime drama and hopefully my latest changes reflect that:


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Here's a thought: I took the final cover (see one down) as perfected by my friends, which takes into account most of their suggestions - because they were damn good suggestions) and adds an overlay of a blood splattered wall - which takes my fairly clean book cover and covers it in a grime that I think may be appropriate for the subject matter - and almost coincidentally dirties up the image of the investigator himself:


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Here's the cover of the book as it stands now, after some very good feedback from my friends via facebook:


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This is the previous version, which they were kind enough to analyze and fix for me:


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This is a version from a couple of days ago. I liked the more posterized, red-tone background, and I revised the back cover blurb.


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Happy Birthday Carol!
December 10, 2011

Today is Carol's birthday. Happy Birthday Carol!!!

Today is also the day we traditionally go get us a Christmas tree. And we have kept up that tradition. The tree is mounted in a stand, and is relaxing as we speak. Then it won't know what hit it when we slap all those decorations on.

 

Thanksgiving Update - or: What Have I Been Up To Lately?
November 24, 2011

Writing Again

Taking a week or so off in August, I decided it was time to write a short story that's been in my head a long number of years. It was about a homeless man in Boston approached by a lawyer searching for a runaway teen who was believed to be on the Boston streets. The homeless man decides to look into it and embroils himself in a case where a father simply wants to know what his kid's life has been like since he ran away. The investigator, nameless like Bill Pronzini's "Nameless Detective", finds out about the kid and reveals to the father the name of his kid's drug dealer on the Boston streets. A murder later and our hero finds out just what he's gotten himself involved in.

I wrote that story as if it had been dammed up inside my head and I had cracked the wall of the dam. And after that a second story came to me, and a third, a fourth, a fifth, a sixth... the series is now nine stories long.

I decided to center the theme around a newspaper the homeless in Boston sell, rather than just panhandling. I found out a bit about "Spare Change" online. I've seen homeless vendors selling them in Boston. They sell for a buck, or whatever you have on you more than a buck. The homeless buy the papers for 25 cents a copy and sell them for a buck. It's a great idea. The stories and the production is done mainly by homeless people and a homeless organization in Cambridge and Boston. I opted to have my hero selling that newspaper, but to protect the real thing I renamed it to "Loose Change".

During the process of writing the first few I came up with a back story for my hero, or my anti-hero, which culminates in two stories at the end of the series that promise to show him some justice for the events that put him on the streets in the first place.

I'm A Submitting Fool

I've been sending my stories out, mostly to Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine, which turns around rejections in just a week or two, rather than 4-5 months like some magazines. After my initial story's rejection, the second one came back rejected but with a very encouraging comment from the editor, so I kept submitting. My fifth submission is in now, waiting rejection.

As they get rejected, I'm trying to find other magazines that will take stories of this length (so far my stories have gone to about the 5-7,000 word range, and most magazines are looking for stories 5,000 and under. So it's difficult.

My friend Michelle edited my first story down to under 5,000, and while that necessarily removed a lot of the atmosphere and the character's voice, the edit worked rather well, and I submitted it to Needle - a Noir magazine.

When I had seven stories ready I began laying them out for a novel with a unique setup - a series of short stories that advances a back-story arc. Almost like a TV series.

I have plans to shoot a cover featuring me in a Boston alley. Charlotte will shoot it, hopefully this weekend.

I ended up with a 9-story book that I have sent to CreateSpace for a print proof. (I realized after I sent it that somehow I had revized the margins and I may have to do this again.)

I mocked up a cover using photos from the internet, but that's just for mockup purposes. Not the final cover.

I also have to do a nice vector map of Boston for a page or two before the stories begin.
Computer Suicide

I normally use Corel Draw, and old version I had for years, from my old workplace. Sadly, the computer I was using it on died and won't restart. Probably just needs a new fan... but now I'm stuck moving data and programs to my new computer, which was a second-hand purchase, but better in power than the dead one.

I'm spending most of Thanksgiving working on this problem. Getting my "new" computer up to scratch.

I did the writing of my stories on the Mac Powerbook I bought second-hand with the specific purpose of writing iPad/iPod/iPhone games. I haven't touched that yet, but I used it to write an Interactive Fiction story last year, and now my latest novel.

My Varied Interests

I get into hobbies rather hard. I mean when I commit to one, I really commit. For a long time, usually. Then I lose interest and move to another one. But then I do that one hard for a while.

I used to write. Quite a bit in the 1990s. For a long time I had no inspiration to write prose. Rather, I wrote photo stories that I photographed using my GI Joe collection, another hobby I got into quite hard for a long time. My pinnacle was The Second Key, a Doctor Who story, a sequel to a well-known series of Doctor Who called The Key to Time. If you like Doctor Who, I highly recommend reading it: The Second Key. It's quite good, if I do say so myself.

That hobby is waning now, as is any toy collecting. My hobby for writing reviews lasted seven years and that's gone now. No interest anymore.
As with everything I do, however, it will cycle around again I'm sure.

Over the past few years I've taken it on myself to come up with a 9-12-month project to keep me busy. Here's a list of some of the most recent ones:

I also did "feelies", tangible objects that help with gameplay immersion. One was a map of the ship, an easy one. The second, however, was an acrylic cube dyed purple, to represent a "data cube", a computer memory storage device in my game.

(See the IFDB page for Piracy 2.0)

I did "feelies" for this too. A note from the Elder to your mother, printed on parchment, folded and wax-sealed. This meant I had to create a wax seal first, which I did by using a Dremel tool on a glass bead. An image of a wolf's head. Also I made a Wolf's head amulet out of a beach rock, also using a Dremel. But then I made hand-crafted copies using black Sculpy and leather thong string. Also it came with (if you ordered through me, and can be downloaded from the site) two maps - one of Ice Wolf Cove Village, one of the forest, and the same two with game-rooms blocked out.

Oh. You can also play the game directly online: Play The Promise

The Promise was met with mixed reviews, mostly because of the rail track ending, which I intended, and also because of the moral implications. I thought it quite a good Grimm-like tale which pulled no punches. I liked it.

It also ended up taking 5th place in a competition - this time of only 6 entries. Sigh. I entered it in the 2011 Spring Thing competition.

(See the IFDB page for The Promise)

I did. I set it up through CreateSpace, a great service, and sent word around. Hoping it would take off, I sold about 40 copies to friends and family and that's about it, but hey, it's out there, and is even available on Amazon, either as a print copy or eBook. (The eBook is not well formatted. I may work on that.)
 

So you see my yearly projects are varied.

But for now it's writing. It kind of started earlier in the year when I wrote a very short flash fiction horror story about monsters under a kid's bed. (That's out to Dark Moon Digest).

This time I'm submitting what I write.

I touched up an older story of mine about a guardian angel and send that to Beat To A Pulp online magazine.

All in all I'm glad I'm writing again. I don't know for how long, but as long as I get the "Loose Change" novel done, I'm happy.

I was hoping to take this winter and make my new project. We shall have to see...

I haven't posted here much lately. Perhaps one of my projects will be to do so more diligently. Facebook almost eliminated the need... but I still like to do it.

OUCH! - The Secret Lives of Vegetables
November 5, 2011

Cutting a red pepper up for tonight's feast, I was shocked when I saw this... (Well, I added the eyes...)


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And in stereo:

It's amazing that it takes just the perfect cut to get this effect, and it was completely accidental. I bet I could not repeat this feat if I tried. You'd have to know the internal structure of the pepper to get it right.

Hmmmm. I sent this to WinBlog and I figured it would easily make it. I haven't seen it up there yet.

Bookmarks - My Latest
October 10, 2011

Here are two more of my Red Rose Tea Box Insert bookmarks. Red Rose tea boxes come with white strips of perfect card for making bookmarks. So I often whip out some markers and make bookmarks based on books I'm currently reading.

Right now, I'm reading Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine and Needle: A Magazine of Noir. Two anthologies of mystery stories:

Ellery Queen
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Needle

You can click each of these for a full sized, high-rez image you cna print yourself if you want a copy.

Here are some more I did a couple of years ago.

What I Did on my Summer Vacation - (And After...)
October 09, 2011

For vacation this summer I took several Fridays off work and then took a week in September.

What did I do to pass the time?

Sit back.

Ok, some of this happened after my vacation, but the creative streak got started during that vacation week and the ideas have been flooding in so hard and fast that I had to buy a voice recorder for my car so I could speak the ideas out on my way to and from work.

Of course as any of this comes to fruition, I will post about it.

My 9/11 Memorial - The Project
September 11, 2011

This week I felt a need to do something to commemorate that day 10 years ago when I was coaching my daughter and her team in soccer, sitting on the bleachers with the other parents and we all looked up and saw absolutely no airplanes in the sky for what must have been the first time since before the 1950s.

So I came up with a simple, elegant memorial anyone can make in a very short time with little money, and can place on any table, mantle, or flat surface.

Here it is, and if you click on the picture, you can read the page on how to create your own. Sorry I was late posting this, but you can use this memorial at any time, not just the 10th anniversary.

Here's the How-To Page. It's a very simple project of paper folding, and finding cheap flashlights. You can even use small electric tea lights. Just don't use candles, obviously.

Steampunk Goggles - The Project - Done
July 30, 2011

Today I spent working on my goggles. Here they are. And here is a full page on how I did it.

Steampunk Goggles - First Alteration
July 16, 2011

I bought a pair of welder's glasses from Amazon.com with the intent of making a pair of steampunk airship pilot goggles. They come in all black plastic and very dark protective lenses.

I have a fairly detailed plan of what they will look like when done, and today I took the first steps towards that goal - I painted them.

So I painted the main body copper, with a fairly nice, realistic copper spray paint. I painted the screw-on rims nickel for now. I may go brass. We'll have to see.

I removed the silver ball-chain link between the two eyepieces, (which was also covered with rubber for nose bridge protection) and put in a length of dark-bronze ball-chain (this is a lamp pull) that better fits the look. I was torn between this color and bright brass. I kind of like this choice.

The funny part is I wanted green lenses to offset the copper, but I couldn't find dark green sunglasses anywhere, so I could fit those lenses in, so I found instead a bright green hollow rubber ball! No kidding! I cut out two shapes, so not only is it gree, but they bug out a bit, which I think looks good.

Not being able to see without glasses anyway, the extra blur brought about by this thick, but transparent rubber, only hinders my eyesight a little more than usual, so I will have no problem navigating a room and recognizing people within 10 feet.

Soon, I will be adding a clip-on double-loupe, which will enhance the look, and a few brass clock gears. I want to attach the loupe in an unusual way, so I'm looking into cutting a slot in the eyepiece rims and epoxying in a gear, and attaching the loupe to the center hole of the gear. Whether that works or not remains to be seen.

Eventually I intend to replace the elastic headband with leather, with metal buckles, and brass nut/bolt combinations. When I'm done, I think this will look quite good.

Our Raspberry Bush - Third Harvest
July 7, 2011

Chris and Michelle Clay asked us if we wanted some raspberry and strawberry plants a few years ago. We were in a new townhouse that had some growing space in the back, so we took them up on the offer. Charlotte, Carol and I went down and plucked up a few shoots of each and planted them in our yard.

The strawberry plants are now everywhere, with their vine-like shoots crawling all across the brick patio area. We see strawberries in the late spring, but rarely get to eat one because they, being delicious and low to the ground, get eaten by chipmunks.

The raspberry bush, however, has grown to enormous proportions, and most of its fruit dutifully grows well above-ground. Perhaps some birds can take the berries, but not the chipmunks. And so far the birds don't seem too interested.

Here's Carol standing next to what was just a couple of years ago, a few six-inch shoots:

You can clearly see a bounty of young berry buds not yet ripe.

This is today's catch, after a fairly thorough picking-through, leaving any not-yet-ripe to ripen.

(Stereo image. Cross your eyes.)

And this is the third harvest I've undertaken. The first two amounted to about what you see here, in two separate weeks. This is today's alone.

Pretty cool. And by the way, golden raspberries are yummy!

 

Steampunk Weapons - More Progress
June 11, 2011

Final paint, I think:

Did a little more painting:


Stereo image. Cross eyes to see in 3D.

Bonsai Progress
June 5, 2011

Every weekend I've been takin pictures of my growing collection of Bonsai trees. Here is an inventory of the current trees, and how they are coming along:

Japanese Pieris - ie: "Red Mill"
Dwarf Rhododendron - "Purple Gem"
Blueberry
Quince
Dwarf Cherry
Compact Japanese Holly
Ming Aralea
Pink Serrisa
Japanese Red Maple
Cherry
Fukien Tea
Firethorn
Birches

Click any pic for a larger image. You will see a dual image, which you can view in stereo if you know how (cross your eyes).

The fukien tea tree came from IKEA. I kid you not! And not long after I repotted it and moved it indoors, it began to grow new leaves, and shoots, one of which is now in flower. I pinched off some of the new shoots, thinking they would grow branches I didn't want, but apparently this is how they flower. I'll leave these other shoots to flower until they're done, and then remove them.

But the firethorn is a bit special to me as it burst out into flower not long after I got it from Bonsai West. But mostly because it's in the Bonsai pot I made myself in a pottery class back in 1991 or 1992. I wish I had made more of those. I'm quite fond, but it's a bit small. Perfectly suited for this small tree, but I wish I had made some much larger circular footed bonsai pots.

Steampunk Weapons - Progress
June 5, 2011

This weekend I did the first metallic paint paint on my "Model A" Steampunk pistol.

Here is the result. Much more to come:

Steampunk Weapons
May 31, 2011

With a Steampunk convention coming up in the fall, I put my thoughts towards customizing some Steampunk weapons.

I was looking for water pistols because I know they have some interesting features, usually hidden by poor molding and bad color choices. But a lick of paint does wonders, in my experience. So I set my eye on what I consider steampunk features, such as piping, gas cylinders, brass-like tubing, etc.

In a local corner store I found several pistols that seem to fit the bill, and each one cost less than $2.00.

Here's my first attempt, and I'll update this blog with my progress, but let's start with the basics. The original, the original painted in a satin black undercoat, and a photoshopped mock-up to put a plan together.

So here we go. This pistol comes from a cheapo line called "Cyber Series", and there are four models in the X-222 series. These are molded in bright colors, in clear and opaque plastics.


Naked yellow, with squirt trigger and cap.

 


Black underpaint.

 


One color scheme idea.

 


Possibily adding a lamp switch for a trigger, a CO2 canister at the front, and a brass cribbage peg with bead for sight. Just some ideas.

I intend to paint the upper gas canister copper, the majority of the pistol body brass, with silver highlights and perhaps a turquoise decorative accent. Either that, or metallic red.

This is just the base. I intend to augment it with metal parts including perhaps a better muzzle, a targeting pin, a trigger, and perhaps a pressure gauge and some small gears.

But hey, not a bad start.

 

The Results of My Banksy shoot.
May 1, 2011 - a few hours later

Driving into Boston is never my idea of a fun thing to do. But I made it. Parked ($12.00 for the day, which is awesome if I was going to stay for more than 17 minutes) and I was about 50 feet away from the Banksy rat I was to shoot near.

So here it is. I have more shots, which I may post later, like Banksy up on the ladder, and one where the Doctor has holding one of the stencil sheets for Banksy.

Upon seeing it, my daughter aptly captioned it: "Awkward..."

So here it is:

 

Awkward...
Awkward...

If you want a larger image, to get more detail, just click the picture and a larger (non-stereo) one will come up.

One thing you'll notice, compared to the shot below which I took about a year ago, various new stickers have appeared, but none encroaches onto the rat. I think those placing the stickers know wherefrom the rat cometh.

(Oh, and a new sticker was added.)

My Banksy shoot.
May 1, 2011

A year or so ago, my daughter and I discovered an actual Banksy rat in Boston, on our way out of the Institute for Contemporary Art on the waterfront.

Recently I entered a Where is the TARDIS competition hosted by BBC America to honor the new season of Doctor Who. The competition is for people building their own TARDISes and sending in photos. One of the shots I have to shoot in a public place, so I thought how cool it would be if I shot the Doctor accidentally encountering Banksy himself painting one of his rats.

And I was off!

I have until May 5 to post the photo to the competition, so I had well over a month to do this, including prep - making 1:6 scale spray cans, getting props together, like the traffic divider I made last year, etc.

But you'd be amazed how hard it was for me to to grab a free Sunday (when there would be little foot traffic) and go in and do the shoot. Impossible, it seemed. With deadlines on my Spring Thing competition, a trip to Arizona spanning TWO of those Sundays, and other obligations, I just couldn't make it.

So here it is, May 1, and I'm off to Boston to do the shoot. So in case you don't know who Banksy is, or what I'm even talking about, here, at least, is a link to my blog entry showing the discovery: Go see Banksy's Rat in Boston.

And here's a photo of it:

Spring Bonsai Experiment. !
April 30, 2011

This past fall I decided it was time to get back into Bonsai. I used to do it in Newfoundland. I had several successes: a found Larch, about a foot tall, that was a perfect cone-shaped miniature conifer that I spied along the Newfoundland highway and transplanted successfully; a found Quince tree that had lovely peach flowers, that I molded into a nice cascade form (which actually had five flowers the first year I had it, and 15 the next, showing it was thriving); and a bought miniature azalea that had nice pink flowers. But then I moved to the US and could not take any of my plants with me.

So this past fall, 14 years later, I decided that if I had gotten back into it right away, I might have some nice 15-year-old or so trees now, that were quite mature and beautiful. Time goes and you forget that fact. So it was time.

I shopped around and bought four very cheap (season was over, everyone was selling out on sale) shrubs that looked the part for a good starter Bonsai. I got a "Japanese Sky Pencil", which is a lovely tall, straight miniature holly tree; a Purple Gem Rhododendron (which is a nice miniature variant) and a Red Mill Japanese Pieris, which I know little about, but I've seen them around a lot.

I left them out in my patio area for the winter, not able to tend to them well because of the five frikkin' feet of snow. I couldn't get to them, so I hoped they would survive their dormant period naturally, without my intervention.

Two did not. Sadly one was the amazing and almost already perfect Bonsai, the Japanese Sky Pencil.

But two did survive and thrive - the Purple Gem Rhododoendron and the Red Mill Pieris.

And today I replanted them from their nursery pots into Bonsai pots. This does require radical root trimming, so I hope I didn't kill them. It's the right time, though - spring. Buds are coming out, new growth. Heck, the purple gem is already spouting flowers, though they haven't fully blossomed yet.

Here they are, in their fresh new pots, in 3D stereo if you can cross-eye view, or if not, just look at one side or the other. (Click for larger image).


Purple-Gem Rhododendron


Red mill

Oh, and one more thing to add. A month or so ago (before I went to Arizona, I was at IKEA because my wife said that there were Bonsai trees there. There were these large-rooted trees, and on checking, I didn't like them much, but I decided to take a trip out there and see what they were like up-close. Well, I still didn't like them. But they also had these Fukien Tea bonsai trees, and there were a few left. An Asian lady had picked one up, but I think she left behind the nicest one, at least for Bonsai - a cascading one. I snapped it up and took it home.

It was about $15.00 or so, and I had not much hope it would survive or anything, but heck, it was worth it to experiment.

So I planted it immediately into a nice, unglazed hexagonal pot designed for semi-cascade format, and I watered it and watched it.

The instructions said it is a plant that is not terribly tolerant to change, so I thought it might die. And sure enough, leaves were turning dark and falling off. But after a week or so I could detect new growth. Bright green leaves, and tiny shoots were growing from the plant, and it's clear this thing may just survive. I have it in a perfect environment for it - indoors, but near a large wall-sized window/door for light.

Here it is, moved temporarily outdoors for the shot:


Chinese Fukien Tea
(As usual, click for larger image. Cross eyes for 3D effect. See it for real!)

Catching Up!
April 24, 2011

Since facebook came along, my blog has kind of gotten somewhat ignored, because I can express most of what I want to express, post most of what I want to post, show photos, etc, all on facebook. But I'm going to try to stay more current here too.

Wow, what a busy year.

Read the posts below, and I'll try to catch up.

Sneak Peak
April 24, 2011

I'm entering a Where Is The TARDIS competition hosted by BBC America to herald in the new year of Doctor Who. We all know I know a thing or two about building my own TARDIS.

So I entered the competition, and one element, besides showing photos of the TARDIS in construction, is to show it in a public place. Well, I have a public place photo, but it's nowhere spectacular. I should have brought it with me to the Grand Canyon last week, but packing it would have been stupid.

Anyway, so I have what I consider a cool public place to show it, and I'm going to do it in style.

Here's a brief hint of one element of the photo I'm going to take:

The reason it's two side-by-side, is if you cross your eyes, you can see it in 3D. Go on, try.

When I actually shoot the picture, I'll post it here and on facebook.

The image so far involves a Doctor Who figure, another figure who will wear a Justin Bieber hoodie, and that's all I'm saying at this point.

 

Easter!
April 24, 2011

This is the cheesecake Carol made for Easter this year:

Heh. Wish I had several small round cup-cakes or something to put in front of it...

Ah. Some cookies will do the job:

Arizona!
April 24, 2011

This past week, Carol, Charlotte and I went to Arizona where Carol's sister has a condo. We met up with her sister and her husband just for a few hours before they flew back to Canada. Another of Carol's sisters stayed the whole week we were there and toured around with us.

We went to the Desert Botanical Gardens, and I tell you, you can't imagine how beautiful a cactus desert is when it's in full bloom until you go here!

Pictures will be posted shortly.

We also went up to Flagstaff for two nights, stopping by Sedona on the way. On the day Portal 2 shipped, I took a shot of a street sign: Portal Lane. (pics later)

From Flagstaff we went to the Grand Canyon and it is, let me say, bloody impressive. You can't wrap your mind around the immensity of the place. The human eyes are just not far enough apart to appreciate the distance of it, we just can't get enough parallax. They need to be at least 20 feet apart to catch even a small idea of what it was like, though some stereo photos I took may show it off a bit, which I will post later.

Then we went to Prescott, and ate at an old Saloon where Wyatt and Virgil Earp and Doc Holiday used to hang at. The original bar is still there, having been rescued in the early 1900s when the saloon caught fire. Men grabbed the ornate bar and dragged it across the street while the saloon burned, and continued to drink there while the building burned down. Badass.

Then we went to Tortilla Flat, on a beautiful, no, stunning mountain drive up a thin, twisty road which at one point overlooks Canyon Lake. OMG! Gorgeous! Or should I say gorge-ous?

Pics later

Spring Thing
April 24, 2011

Well, this past year's project has been "The Promise", an interactive fiction game written in (as I learned) Inform 7, which is a natural language programming language making the coding itself somewhat interesting.

My intent was to enter it into the 2011 Spring Thing.

I came up with the idea for "The Promise" while watching "Secred of the Celts", an animated movie. In the game you play Wil, the son of a father who died a few years ago and an ailing mother, in a village that has been plagued with perpetual winter for a couple of decades. Everyone possible is out on a hunt to get food for the village you live in, leaving you to help out around the village. You begin by helping the various crafters (candle maker, glazier, potter, etc.) with chores on what is essentially a series of Fed-Ex quests in which you are hopefully supposed to learn something about the village and explore a bit.

Later, a stranger stumbles into the village and you alert the Elder. He tells a tale of marauders moving down the coast by ship, sacking all villages along the way. His own was attacked, and he's been running ever since to warn your village.

You are then asked to take to the forest to find ingredients for something, you don't know what. But you go, and before you do you hand your mother a letter from the Elder. She then gives you an amulet that your father supposedly carved one day when he was your age, on a day he spent alone in the forest (before the forest became so dangerous - before the advent of the Ice Wolves.) The back story of the amulet is interesting, and a central point of the story. But it also allows you to enter the forest safely, and move to places you've visited already in one move.

In the forest you encounter an interesting person, and make a promise, and are tasked to keep that promise no matter what, and you soon learn the seriousness of that promise.

I got the game done just under the wire for the Spring Thing competition in 2011. 2010's competition saw ZERO entries, oddly enough. This year I found out we have six entries.

I missed the e-mail deadline to establish my intent to enter, but thanks to the gracious good-will of the organizer, and the other participants, I was allowed to enter anyway. I had simply forgot to do it. I had it all planned, and I visited the site so often, I thought I had e-mailed my intent, but on checking, I hadn't. Anyway, water under the bridge.

The reviews, scant though they are so far, (probably until the comp is over in early May) have not been kind.

Emily Short trashed it mightily. The commenters on her blog weren't as kind.

I read another similar review of it, but one that seemed to get the game more, and actually played it through in great detail, taking the trouble to get the back story from the NPCs, but I forget where that one was. I saw it on Planet-IF, but it's gone, as that seems to be a temporary aggregator. Oh. Here it is! http://diden.net/~maga/springthing2011.html

Jenny Palodna of Pissy Little Sausages gives it a less harsh review. I think she probably gave me a bit of a pass because we met last year and I gave her Purple Data Cubes (from my previous game "Piracy 2.0").

One rating on IFDB was a 1 star of five. Sigh.

I guess "The Promise" will be my last IF entry. Ever. I have no need to spend a year of my life on something people are going to absolutely hate. When a story designed for an introductory audience, (kids) is trashed so thoroughly based on my ham-fisted use of promises, with Emily Short even going so far as to quote Greek doctrine on the matter of promises, then it's fucking time to throw in the towel, no? I guess what I like in Interactive Fiction is not the norm these days. My last game, "Piracy 2.0" was met with some skepticism due to its "old-school" nature as well, but it's a game I liked to play, and a style I still love. And I guess others agreed since it took 5th place in the 2008 IF Comp, out of a field of 35.

I even went through great trouble to make feelies.

Amazon.com's Breakthrough Novel Awards
April 24, 2011

In November I self-published my novel "The Black Blade: A Gull Village Story" through CreateSpace. This also means it's available on Amazon.com. I was also able to convert it, though rudimentarily, to Kindle format.

But I also entered it into the Amazon.com's Breakthrough Novel Awards, where 10,000 people maximum enter two categories: General Fiction, and Young Adult Fiction. Without my realizing it, General Fiction has sub-categories, but because I was unaware of that, I entered it into the Young Adult section, but that's ok, because I always considered it a YA book anyway.

The first round of cuts, 10,000 entries, were chosen based on a pitch document. I made it.

The second round of cuts, 250 entries in each main category, were chosen based on a 3,000 (max) word excerpt, the first 3 chapters of my book. I made it.

I find out on Tuesday if I made the third cut, down to 50 per category. I have a 1/5 chance, but I don't know... I'm not getting great feedback from other entrangs on the forums, but then a lot of of those entrants have derivative ideas in their books. God help me if I read another excerpt about a school for young magicians, or another one about vampires or werewolves, or god forbid, zombies. It's like nothing is original.

Oh well, I'll post here with the result of hte third round of cuts.

I WILL FILL OUT THE FOLLOWING TOPICS OVER THE NEXT WEEK OR SO:

Pax East

San Fran GDC

iPod 2

Bonus

Black Blade

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